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1º Daniel Pizarro’s Blog.

First entry:
http://cstdanielpizarro1m.blogspot.com/2010/05/english-publishers.html

English publishers
Cambridge:
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Mars:
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Oxford:
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Oxford Textbook of Medicine:
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Hazard:
Voice of the Tiger:unossoldados is a story of going to new zealand, in that place they find adventure, romance, etc. This personal book is recommended for lovers of literature

Memoirs of a Dark Overlord […]

Correction:

Hazard:
Voice of the Tiger: is a story of soldiers who go to New Zealand, in that place they find adventure, romance, etc. This personal book is recommended for lovers of literature

Second entry:
http://cstdanielpizarro1m.blogspot.com/2010/05/new-york-times.html

New York Times
I find that this newspaper is good because it explains in detail the acts and views of different writers, there are good and alludan images to better understand the news.
The format of a news understands that and is easy to get news and has various applications besides the news is fast in plublic also appears infor about everything and is very anplia information.

Correction:

I find that this newspaper is good because it explains in detail the acts and views of different writers, there are good and pictures help to understand the news.
The format of news understands that and is easy to get news and has various applications besides the news is fast in public also appears information about everything and. is very wide information



2º: Valentina González
First Entry:
http://cstvalentinagonzalez1m.blogspot.com/2010/05/new-york-times-news.html

The New York Times
this website is the most boring of all I've seen that is directed specifically to adult and elderly people
this site as the name says is the city of new york
This site is more boring but more complete if we see another point.
This page is also a magazine and leaving things fashion freak and data.

Correction:

The New York Times
This website is the most boring of all I've seen that is directed specifically to adult and elderly people.
This site as the name says is the city of New York. (Missing capital letters and points.)
This site is more boring but more complete if we see another point.
This page is also a magazine and leaving things fashion freak and data.

Second Entry:
http://cstvalentinagonzalez1m.blogspot.com/2010/04/if-i-had-superpowers-i-would.html

IF I HAD SUPERPOWERS, I WOULD...

If I had superpowers would help people.The power that I like is to fly, so could
travel the world and go to all the sides I wanted.Another would be invisible so.
I could go anywhere without anyone knowingof course without breaking the privacy jajajajaxdd.I also gustria be very elastic thing that does not hurt tobend or
open my legs and do stunts.It would be nice to have super strength to sustain
heavy things so effortlessly.
If there were people to with powers as we could do as a group as well
as theJUSTICE LEAGUE and Salber people and help

Correction:

If I had superpowers would help people. The power that I like is to fly, so could travel the world and go to all the sides I wanted. Another would be invisible so.
I could go anywhere without anyone knowing, of course without breaking the privacy hahaha. I also like to be very elastic, for not to harm me when I will open my legs, or double, or when I will do acrobatics.
It would be nice to have super strength to sustain heavy things so effortlessly.
If there were people to with powers as we could do as a group as well as the JUSTICE LEAGUE and and save people and help.








3º Aniffe Sein
http://cstaniffesein1m.blogspot.com/2010/04/if-i-had-superpowers-i-would.html

IF I HAD SUPERPOWERS, I WOULD...

If I had super powers like me to have the following super powers:
"Incredible Jumps
"Being athletic
"Blend in (transparency)
-Elastica
-Strength
and post supposed to be able to fly.

The powers would use them to help people if you are in trouble, but I do not like to be a superhero and that depended on my city.
I would like to use the powers as fun.

But closely have super powers and be a magician or sorceress prefer a thousand times I can obtner haci porqe magic all the powers I nomabrado inifinitas most other things you can do to be like the charmed (TV)